Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Journal 39

Tuesday.

Today i finished up my conclusion really Quickly so then i can have time to edit my essay.after i finished editing my essay briefly i started to write down my bibliography on easybib.com. at the beginning i had a few problems opening easybib but then there were no problems at all. i think that i really used my time wisely today.

Journal 38

Monday.

today i printed out my essay so then i can edit it easily and have an idea on how to start my conclusion. so i started to write my conclusion but still didn't finish it up. it me a lot of time to think of how I'm going to start and end my conclusion. i think that i worked well for the day.

Journal 37

Sunday.

today i continued working on my Art and Architecture and finished it at the end of the lesson because i was working really hard so i finished it in the write time. We and Mr.Sparks decided that the day that we have to hand in our essay on Thursday this week. so planned what I'm going to do each lesson we have humanities this week. i think that i really really really worked well to day.

Journal 36

Thursday.

i was absent.

Journal 35

Tuesday.

today i was still working on my Government and Law characteristic. today i think that i talked a bit to much and so that's why i didn't do a lot of work. i finished Government and law nearly at the end of the lesson and started my first paragraph on Art and Architecture. i think that i can work way better next time than i worked today.

Journal 34

Monday.

today i was working on my religion for half of the lesson. then i started to write about the Romans Laws and Government. And now i now that the Romans Women,new born babies and slaves weren't counted as citizens and so they couldn't vote for their leader and that's not fair. i think that i worked well for the day.

Journal 33

Sunday.



today when we came to class Mr.Sparks told us to use this lesson to read all our note cards and go through the essay to remember what we were writing about and where did we get to. And so after i did all that it was almost the end of the lesson so i quickly wrote on small paragraph about the Romans religion i think that it was good for us to go through what we did to get back on the track. i also think that i worked well for the day.

Journal 29-32

Week Without Walls

Journal 28

Thursday, May 7,2009.

Today i finished writing my introduction, it included the fact that each civilization has to have the six characteristics to be a civilization. it also included the three characteristics that i choose. then i started to write about the first characteristic which was religion. i started to write about that the ancient Romans believed that gods, goddesses and powerful spirits controlled the humans actions. i think that i worked really hard today and i hope to do the same in the next days.

Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Journal 27

Tuesday, May 5,2009.

Today i started my essay as soon as i logged in on the computer. it took my a while until i started to write because i had a hard time thinking on what the essay will be. then i started i talked about the concept of time in my introduction i also taked about what civilization i choose and what were the three characteristics that i choose from the six characteristics. i also started on my paragraph about the Ancient Romans religion.

Journal 26

Monday, May 4,2009.

Today we continued planning our essay. Some people started to write their essay and that's OK but it doesn't mean that the people started are behind. i wrote some questions on the planning sheet that I'm going to answer in my essay. Today i didn't start to write my essay because i was doing my planning, and i didn't have time to start.

Journal 25

Sunday,May 3,2009.

I was absent on Thursday,April 30,2009. it was the last day for us to research on information about our civilization. Today we started to plan what we are going to write in our introduction, conclusion and in the three characteristics that i choose. we discussed the concept of time and we used the this question What was it like for people living in that time? as our guiding question,. Mr.Sparks told us that if we talk as a first person For Example, i ,me ,and my in our essay we will loose marks .